Corruption and Its Consequences- Sci-Fi Story (Maybe RP)

[SrgtGreen]

Yeah I’m still trying to figure this out (as Ceta is as well, I’m sure). Eventually we’ll probably get all of our characters together for one plot point and we can then take turns. For now, I’d say to continue our own plots until that point comes.

Honestly, not really. But that does work out.

And it’s your story. I’m not trying to tell you all how to do it. Ceta is the boss. I’m just trying to do my best to help this get off the ground. So in the end, I leave the big choices up to you, Ceta. Please do not think I was trying to command how to do this. I apologize if that is how it sounded.

Okay I was just curious. I’ll let other people write now...

[Spartanz19]

Z19 hopped in the drop ship and contacted the intel agent. Or, agents.

“This is Agent Reaper, do you copy? Over.”

“This is operator Z19, I read you. Nice to work with you again, Isaac, over.”

“And this is Agent Dark-Angel. Or, you might know me as Lizzy.”

“Umm, two agents, and one of them is my girlfriend. What’s going on up there?”

“This is Reaper, General arranged it this way due to recent studies proving that working with friends boosts productivity and morale.”

“Well, good to know. What intel can you two give me?”

“This is Dark-Angel. We know that the target is staying in an upscale part of Aurora. If you search for him there, keep an eye out for a man with a green holopad and has light blue hair. The meeting is set for 9:00 tonight. We don’t have much to work with other than what we know through the databanks. I’m uploading what we know now. Good luck Agent.”

Z19 flipped through the pages of data. Two years of experience in the military, few family connections, hard drinker. Nothing that would really stand out. Wait, Z19 found something. The target had to have his left leg replaced with a prosthetic due to war injuries. His walking pattern will probably be different.

Z19 jumped out of the ship and onto a rooftop eight stories above the ground. Intel had assumed he was near that area, and it was time to test their assumption. Z19 deployed his Night Owl, a Recon and Surveillance drone. None of the scanned people matched the target. There were so many passerby’s that it was difficult to search from above, so Z19 dropped from the rooftops into a nearby alleyway and cloaked his weapons.

[Spartanz19]

Here’s the customs.

[81Ceta_Deta]

Yeah I’m still trying to figure this out (as Ceta is as well, I’m sure). Eventually we’ll probably get all of our characters together for one plot point and we can then take turns. For now, I’d say to continue our own plots until that point comes.

Honestly, not really. But that does work out.

And it’s your story. I’m not trying to tell you all how to do it. Ceta is the boss. I’m just trying to do my best to help this get off the ground. So in the end, I leave the big choices up to you, Ceta. Please do not think I was trying to command how to do this. I apologize if that is how it sounded.

It didn't sound like that all. You were just trying to being helpful. Don't feel bad about that.

[81Ceta_Deta]

//2

Lewis sat at a table, eating his lunch and reading the news on his phone. More news about the Celestial Campaign, and something about a Senator Nigel Thompson. Apparently, the Senator had made a argument to President Barand, trying to fix the corruption and stop the mass executions. The President had instead had Nigel thrown out of the conference. Lewis liked this guy. Wait... Lewis looked at the news picture again. Tan suit. The same guy in the hovercraft. I guess this guy really did want the corruption to end; by blowing up a main mining center and causing a major hit to the CGC's power. Whatever. He continued to eat, and when the PA came over and stated that it was time to move out, he dumped his food and washed his hands. Lewis started to walk to the hangar, and saw Stephen cleaning his gun. As usual. Stephen needed new hobbies.
"All right, gents! And ladies. In exactly five minutes we will be in that freighter and on our way to Shaina, where we'll be blowing up a mining center and causing chaos! If all goes well, at least." Wallace said. "Now get to it!"
The squad started to board the freighter, which they would use to pretend to be Celestial Suppliers and shipping mining materials. He walked up the dark gray metal ramp, and sat down beside Stephen on a rusty gray seat. He strapped himself in, and looked around. Wallace sat beside Viss, the team sharpshooter. Ani, the explosive ordnance specialist, sat in the far most seat, her blond hair brushing up against her forehead. The pilots walked up the ramps, wearing the usual aero gear. The pilots carried hand guns, which was nee, even for rebel pilots. The pilots walked into the cockpit, and sat down, the door to the cockpit closing behind them.
"All righty, this is flight York-3247. Pilots are Alpha 22 and Omega 23. Next stop— Shaina airbase. Buckle up and get those guns ready." The left pilot said over the freighter PA. The freighter took off from the base, and started its path to Amers 20.

[Rogue-Elite]

The trade Syndicate


A shady organization covered by the facade of being a trade corporation, in actuality, it is a large criminal underground, everything to gang hits, bribery and paramilitary operations.


It is said that the leader has the power to manipulate elections and to cause wars, anyone who has tried to go after the faction politically was found dead by 'rebel' attacks.


The goal of the faction is a perpetual war so they can sell and fund their extensive arms trade and keep under the radar while the Syndicate has immense power it is not invincible and a full scale war would lead to the faction crumbling however this would result in a massive economic crash and mass panic.



The syndicate sells banned weapons and munitions deemed to be too powerful to the rebellion and the CGC.


how do you like this ceta?

[SrgtGreen]

The executioner fell back, a pool of blood spreading around him. 5 guys in the front of the crowd pulled out those super quiet pistols and took out the officers guarding the stage. They climbed up the stage, and cut the political prisoner free. Then, one of the rebel warriors said, “Take the traitor, could have intel.” Someone approached Srgt. Green and cut him free. “Cmon, we don’t have much time, Celestials are converging on our position!” Srgt. Green stood up and ran after them, through the now fleeing crowd. They turned into a narrow alley and one of them spoke into his mic, “We have the Objective and are ready for extraction. Got it?” “Copy,” a women’s voice replied. They started off, but encountered four Celestial Troops. They were easily dispatched. Srgt. Green picked up one of the fallen foe’s weapons only to find all five of the rebel’s pistols pointed at him. “Drop. It.” one said. The Srgt. Immediately dropped the gun and they were off again.

After a six minute jog, they arrived at the extraction point. A stealth, military grade Quadro-copter sat on a roof top. Someone released a latter and the Politician climbed up first. The rebel force followed, and Srgt Green climbed up last. Once inside, he opened up his mouth to say something like, “What the heck just happened?” when a needle entered his neck, and everything went black.

[81Ceta_Deta]

Rogue- Very neat, i'd like to include some more organizations.

Green- That's pretty good.

I'll be writing more, probably for Celestial POV

[SrgtGreen]

Rogue- Very neat, i'd like to include some more organizations.

Green- That's pretty good.

I'll be writing more, probably for Celestial POV

Thanks. I’m new to this sort of thing. I Don’t always know when/where to add details to the story, the characters, and to the environment and when to keep it vague. Any advice?

[Spartanz19]

Rogue- Very neat, i'd like to include some more organizations.

Green- That's pretty good.

I'll be writing more, probably for Celestial POV

Thanks. I’m new to this sort of thing. I Don’t always know when/where to add details to the story, the characters, and to the environment and when to keep it vague. Any advice?

My advice is to add as much detail as you can, that way you can literally see it when you’re reading. Sometimes people won’t even realize all the details, but it’s still important to have them there.

Also, making your characters interesting is important. Make the readers attached to them, or hate them, in one way or another. Adding details of their appearance is very important as well.

As to keeping it vague, I usually keep it vague when I’m introducing a new character whose role is very secretive or dark. Such as a bounty hunter or assassin.

I hope these help, I’ve been writing here for three years, so if you have anything specific to ask, I’m always here.