The Monster Inside Us

[81Ceta_Deta]

Hey Guys. I thought of the name of my comic. And some story. It’ll be about a team of spartans, marines (some marines will be added to be unnamed) and how during the battle of Antares, they’re split off from a rally point. It follows Ceta Company, lead by Spartan- Ceta 1-765, a spartan III. They get ambushed by a corrupt corpation sided with Nato’s covenant faction. As they fight off the hostiles, they realise- The covies were no where close. They had been hundreds of miles off. Some how, the covies and Deata Corp found them. Deata Corp is another Corpation who sided with the Covenant remants. As the spartans start to investigate the situation., they slowly begin to realise they have a mole. Eventually maybe this can cross over with Nato’s, it might not but i would love so if it could. The pick a fig will be the characters. The newest characters (first 2) are the Deata Corp Leader and Combat General. The perpertraitor is feeding info to the Deata and Covenant Remnants. The Team don’t realise who it is (and neither will whose character it is). Eventually they figure it out, but its too late. The Deata and Covenant Remnants attack, wiping out all the unnamed marines and injuring Ceta. This is all i have so far. You guys like it?

[JoeFilms]

Sounds good, man! My one bit of advice: You can reply to your older comic threads, and then they'll be moved up to the top of the forum. Then you don't have to make a new one each time!

[81Ceta_Deta]

Sounds good, man! My one bit of advice: You can reply to your older comic threads, and then they'll be moved up to the top of the forum. Then you don't have to make a new one each time!

yes i know. I just prefer to make one to distinguish it as a whole

[NatoGreavesy]

Sounds interesting. The title is especially intriguing.

Just something to note: my comic is part of a the much larger 'Mega-Verse' collaboration, a series of long-running, interconnected comics. The Battle of Antares is our first big crossover event, and since you've mentioned you're new to the forum, I'd encourage you to ask around in the main 'Mega-Verse' topic (https://www.megaconstrux.com/en-us/comm ... =24&t=3785) to clarify some of the stuff you might've missed.

In particular, you've mentioned a corrupt corporation that's allied with my Covenant group... but so far, Ashes of Antares has actually featured about 4 different ex-Covenant factions, so I'm not sure which one of them you're referring to here. That said, I'm totally open to collaborations and crossovers, especially during Antares, which is already one big crossover.

[81Ceta_Deta]

Sounds interesting. The title is especially intriguing.

Just something to note: my comic is part of a the much larger 'Mega-Verse' collaboration, a series of long-running, interconnected comics. The Battle of Antares is our first big crossover event, and since you've mentioned you're new to the forum, I'd encourage you to ask around in the main 'Mega-Verse' topic (https://www.megaconstrux.com/en-us/comm ... =24&t=3785) to clarify some of the stuff you might've missed.

In particular, you've mentioned a corrupt corporation that's allied with my Covenant group... but so far, Ashes of Antares has actually featured about 4 different ex-Covenant factions, so I'm not sure which one of them you're referring to here. That said, I'm totally open to collaborations and crossovers, especially during Antares, which is already one big crossover.

I’ll do the covie factor with Zaal. And I’ve read each of your comics and about everyone else who has had something to do with the mega verse.

[NatoGreavesy]

My, you've been busy. Good to hear you've done your research.

Zaal is part of a group who will soon be called the 'Dark Grasp' (they'll be consolidating themselves and taking on the new name in an upcoming chapter of my comic). They're a sort of mad science division, specialising in robotic enhancement, immoral experimentation, and all of that fun stuff. They'd definitely be willing to establish some kind of alliance with a human corporation if they thought they could benefit from it.

[JoeFilms]

My, you've been busy. Good to hear you've done your research.

Indeed he has! That's a lot of reading!

[TheRealBoo101]

Sadly I haven't, the only full comic series I was able to read from Nato was Those Two Guys, that's about it.

[81Ceta_Deta]

My, you've been busy. Good to hear you've done your research.

Zaal is part of a group who will soon be called the 'Dark Grasp' (they'll be consolidating themselves and taking on the new name in an upcoming chapter of my comic). They're a sort of mad science division, specialising in robotic enhancement, immoral experimentation, and all of that fun stuff. They'd definitely be willing to establish some kind of alliance with a human corporation if they thought they could benefit from it.

I’ve been lurking here for years. Just joined.

[81Ceta_Deta]

Hey guys! I posted the characters and whats left. Nato would you like a character?