Spartan story

[eliteslayer4915]

Sorry, been doing a bit of fanfiction writing on another site, I'll get back into the action soon!

[EVASPARTAN228]

Sorry, been doing a bit of fanfiction writing on another site, I'll get back into the action soon!

Good to hear

[eliteslayer4915]

++ Alright boys, let's make this quick! ++ Sebaste radioed.

++ J85, ready! ++

++ Delta, online! ++

++ Hunter, awaiting your orders! ++

++ Rook, in position! ++ Came the affirmations from the others.

++ All right, Breach! ++ Sebaste ordered

[EVASPARTAN228]

++ Alright boys, let's make this quick! ++ Sebaste radioed.

++ J85, ready! ++

++ Delta, online! ++

++ Hunter, awaiting your orders! ++

++ Rook, in position! ++ Came the affirmations from the others.

++ All right, Breach! ++ Sebaste ordered

Dude this makes no sense, J85 and Rook are in an unknown location with lara and we are at power of protection, if we are breaching the craft though then I see what you was doing

[eliteslayer4915]

*Face palm* Oy, I feel stupid....

[EVASPARTAN228]

*Face palm* Oy, I feel stupid....

Dont worry we all make mistakes

[DevilDoll]

"Breach! The dock is breached!." The Spartan yelled to an Elite.
"Weapon will be charged in... 3... 2... 1... Weapon is hot." Another Elite stated.
Commander-"Fire."
Just then an explosion rocked the ship.
Commander-"Damage assessment?! Where did that come from?!"
Spartan-" Sectors 39 through 68 are destroyed. Sectors 72, 73 and 74 report all pressure lost. Our guests blew the ignition system."
Commander-"And the target?"
Spartan-" We barely skimmed her."


Lara-"We're NOT gonna survive another hit like that!"
Holt-"How'd they miss? They had us, dead to rights."
The first mate screeched.
J85-"You gotta be kidding. How?"
Lara-"Took out the ignition line."
Holt-"See? Now you're understanding."
Lara-"Not really. Just look."
She put the image up on the holographic projector.
Lara-"That's the 'Punishment'. I remember her fuel and ignition systems are located in these sectors.'
She pointed to an area of the ship that had been blown apart.
Lara-"We may not be able to move, but neither can she."
J85 stared hard at the hologram. He whispered to himself.
J85-"Good move, sis. Good move."


... To be continued

[Assassinater117]

Okay I am a little confused, I thought J85 was on the pelican (with Rook and Havok) that would board the 'Punishment'?

[DevilDoll]

Reread. Rook and Havok had eleven others with them. J85, Lara, the Zealot, and Holt are on the Pelican, monitoring the 'Azure', waiting with the antimatter bomb for the signal.

[Assassinater117]

Oh shoot, didn't even think that *facepalm* okay well then... its time for a fight...